lunes, 24 de agosto de 2009

Is worth to falling in love?


In the life, everybody climb his own mountains, ones prefer to do it alone, to fell the individual gratification, to conquer each cliff without help and without share the success no one.
The Marriage is an unusual adventure for growing and ripening. Also this mean to leave to travel alone and start the expedition accompanied. To climb this mountain of life helping and being helped by someone

6 comentarios:

  1. =O this is a opend mind blog =P, but I think fall in love is one of the unexplained things in the world.
    It's really strange.

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  2. Love is not a tailored suit, or you look a little bigger or a little shorter, you have to know fit, love has its advantages and disadvantages.
    I've really come to the conclusion that it's worth falling in love, and then give everything for that person, but give it all means doing good for her, no means do what she wants, but what is really better, this is often not the same.

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  3. I like what you say, many things are very true :) I hope and you can read some of my poems c:

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  4. You've got quite a few grammar errors, here:

    In life, everybody climbs their own mountains, some prefer to do it alone, to fall (or do you mean feel?)individual gratification, to conquer each cliff without help and without sharing success with anyone.
    Marriage is an unusual adventure for growing and growing old together. This also means to stop travelling alone, and start the expedition accompanied. To climb this mountain of life helping and being helped by someone.

    They are lovely thoughts, and your writing is good, although you have to check, if you are transcribing your thoughts directly from spanish to english, that you follow the rules of English grammar, otherwise your writing won't make much sense.
    I'm also from a spanish-speaking country, and I realized that the more I read in English (it doesn't matter what I choose to read) the easier it gets to write, as it comes more naturally. This applies for any language you are trying to learn.
    You should try it (:

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